Ghostship Lanterns
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Today’s #Song4Comment for song critique is –> “Perfect Storm” by Ghostship Lanterns
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I enjoyed this song.. I think the vocals make it work. Very relaxing.. Pink Floydish.. I can only add that the electronic “beeps” or synth keyboard might be more effective if you pulled them out of the song at times making them more sparse..
I really enjoyed your song and your voice.
-JLN
I like the mix on the recording. However, i was lost when trying to follow the lyrics. Sorry to be the bearer of bad news
Great song, and a great instrument mix! Very Pink-Floyd”ish”. The vibe pulls you in and keeps you mesmerized. Nice!
Only nit I’d have is it seems as though the lead vox was severely EQ’d – I’d have liked to hear more body in the mids and a bit more presence in the upper-mids. Compared to the rest of the mix, it seemed constrained.
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