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We ran the following Songwriting Exercise on Twitter:
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“#Songwriting Ex: Write short lyric capturing FEELING of this pic. Doesn’t have 2b too literal. Post 2 TwitPic”
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and here are the entries that we got in:
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Soaring ona quiet breeze/reality looms below/Floating high above the world/My spirit starts 2 glow
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You got my head in the sky, clouds under my feet. Few are down to earth, most will never reach.
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I feel safe in ur arms,
afraid, but somehow calm,
like on a high when gliding thru the sky
afraid, but somehow calm,
like on a high when gliding thru the sky
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When I give my worries away and jump into a brand new day. The air hits my face I know I’ll be okay.
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Ready for takeoff, Get my feet off the ground. Future’s still a crap shoot, Even with the roots you put down.
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u know what goes up — always goes the other way — we flew, we fell — and I’m gone, can’t stay
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When I’m with you, I feel like I’m flying/ You’ve got my heart soaring without wings.
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- What do you think about these entries?
- Which do you think is the best?
- Think you can do better?
Leave your entry or your comment in the comments box below:
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LIKE A TEENAGE LOVER- I COULD WRITE IT IN THE SKY- YOUR ALL IT TAKES- TO MAKE ME FEEL ALRIGHT..
well,it’s sounds like poams,and or rhymes..two got my attention. 1 legend,”few are down to earth ,most will never reach. that’s “metaphoric” and ,kaffbrown,”falling free,and a fear that pulls me” again metaphoric.but i wonder where the song’s will go? that’s my problem with song writing. i come out strong ,then i get stuck? thank you. james